Critics Page
from A Thousand Times You Lose Your Treasure
SEEDS AND CRUMBS
yes a famous mise-en-scene
“when I was just a little girl”
angle looks too much like angel
and vice a versa
what lies ahead
rainbow
rainbows
who cares
scatter the song
clavichord it
the future’s not ours
to see tenderly
FAILED TOWER CA DAO
sonnet tied to the sky
struck by lightning
in that one film version
of Frankenstein who
was it that feared
the storm and lightning
myth and history twist
exile into a tower structure
also called “mouth”
that feeling of headlong
the site of mother
my longing in language
see my eyes rubies red I feed
on toxic flowers kiss one
or any flower rise clean from
mud water row a petal boat
absurd longing to sing the sun
to exist and live an island of
SHE LEADS WITH FLOWER WANDS
Made by the dead puppeteer the rings
found them it seemed Dry papery magenta
flowers of the wild bougainvillea
Multiple ghosts jab your throat thorns
in the uninterrupted kitchen dream
They could see it was perfect so their prophecy
was fulfilled so the lung smothered dies
so they wrote down their dreams
Their way made unpassable so fall through
worlds dashing the red gourd
of light on the way